fantubulous+muffins

3 things that need to be improved are...
We think that maybe you should have some more pictures and captions. The pink around the page is inviting but maybe you should make it have cool text too. We also think that since you are writing for all ages that you should have miore conections the readers.

2 things that are good...
like we said before the pink around the page is very inviting and sets a cheerful mood. and we also think that tyou have a lot of information.

1 thing that we learned...
that the berlin wall speterated east germany and west berlin.